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Dark ship
By: Leslie
Dark boat not so long ago there was boat called Dark Bloody Mary. It was hunted. One time the boat was headed to go form New Year to England. The boat was designed so detail. As so someone had planned this boat. It had a huge balling room. That had so much gold that my eyes turned wider. And the rooms had so much stuff that I can’t keep up with it. And outside of the boat it’s white and in big bold letters it said “Mary”. My name is Sammie. Once I came in was very weird as something was pulling me out of the huge boat as they didn’t want me enter. So I told mother that I didn’t wanted to go in. But my moms said with a scared face “NO”. I knew something bad is going too happened. I had a large puffy dress. That got stock in large narrow hook. It tears my dress a huge hole as it was designed like that. Once I came in the boat there was so many people. She said “everyone in here is ready for a change” my mom said in strange face. Once we went to the check in the check chart. The men gave us room 615. He looked liked he didn’t wanted o give us the key. But he did anyways. Then we went into the 615. It had only one bed and ton of decorations it also had a doll on top of the bed. I loved it I loved her bold shine hair it also had beautiful blue dress like mine it’s smile was big so big it took all it of it’s face. My mom said that she was going to take bath to get ready for the big show tonight. I just play with the doll. Then I herd a scream it was my mom. So I run in to the bath room. I looked at her she was very freaked out then I glance at the bath tub it look at if it was a bowl of fruity punch. Then a man came in. He was also frocked out too. Be was so brave that he called the department center. Then a police came and smell the water. I as very confused. The police poured some water in a bowl. And he just left. Than my mom said, very loud and clear “Get ready for tonight”. So I put on a beautiful blue gown with white shinny stones. Then I was finish and I saw what my mom is going to but on. She had red gown that sparkles on it. And it she also had red lip stick. Then my mom went to perform for her concert. I just sat there to the nearest table to her. Then a boy popped and asked me to dance so I said “yes”. I couldn’t say no I just went ahead. We dance all night then it got to mom favorite song. Then the boat turned. We all were very scared. I ran to my mom and went and hugged me she was very scared too. Then the turned again and then my mom want to the other said and went to other. I was scramming “mom mom’’. She went to me. When she was getting there she screamed and she was dead. My mother died. It was December, 15 1996. She left me behind. Now I’m 21 years old and I hate my past. I hope one of these days. I find that boat. It came to the day. I was
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